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PostSubject: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Tue Jun 03, 2014 10:48 am

OOC Info:
Name: Dravocn
Recruited by: I guess a different site owner... but honestly i pretty much came here myself
Email: PM me preferably please


Character Info:
Name: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro (it's a name i've been using for every one of my characters on every one of the rp sites i'm on.... i hope that's okay.)

Code Name: BioMech Alchemist

ID Number: BMC1869

Age & Date of Birth: He is 18 years old and was born in 1919

Gender: Male

Character Class: State Alchemist Class B

Race: Human

Nationality: Amestrian

Language: Amestrian

Province & City of Residence: Central City

Place of Birth: Amestris

Rank/Occupation/Role Desired:
Rank B, Alchemist, Furher (I did that in the order of the slashes if that's alright)

Specialization:
Mechanic/Engineer he learned from his family, Intelligence from studying constantly and consistantly, Recon as in EXTREMELY good spy and adept at stealth

Family:
Mother: Krista Hecoro (Works as a Owner of a mega corporation)
Father: Daniel Hecoro (Works as a Mechanic/Engineer.... and pretty much the best one around)
Sister: Christina Hecoro (Twin sister with Lovey Hecoro, Works as a direct secretary for her mother)
Sister: Lovey Hecoro (Twin sister with Christina Hecoro, Works as a direct secretary for her mother)
(Hey... it's better than her mom letting her be a waitress working in a place full of perverted guys.)

Appearance:

-Face Actor: Hajime Saito (from Hakuouki)

-Hair: Violet, short hair
-Eyes: Deep blue
-Height: 6'
-Build: lean
-Automail: his left arm, his left foreleg and foot
-Possessions usually found on persona: Two blades that he brought with him to think of his family... doesn't use them... they're just for aesthetics.
-Typical Choice of Clothing: As shown in picture
-Tattoos or Scarring: Just transmutation circle tattoos on his arm and hand and etchings of transmutation circles on his automail arm and hand
-Transmutation Circle: Can transmute without a circle, however due to his extra careful tendencies, he has a tattoo on his arm, he has a tattoo on his hand, one engraved on his automail, and on both of his gloves

History:
Dravocn had only been recruited by the military for a couple months and he had already advanced to that of a state alchemist. He did this through work equaling that of the majority of his betters as well as doing exactly what the military told him to do the way they told him to do it... he didn't like it at all but he didn't complain for he knew that when he got to the spot he wants he would be able to right the military's wrongs. Dravocn would never be around people, though he would always find time to hang out with his family, they were always the kind of people who would show their love in the most complicated of ways... one time when Drav hit honor roll in his school of eighty highly intelligent students and he was the only one to hit honor roll, his parents gave him a wish.... any wish he wanted.... he was never able to make up his mind... his mother offered a position just below hers, his father offered to build him a custom built robot made however Drav liked. He was only able to choose one... and he chose the job, a waste one might say but eventually he'd be able to afford it anyway. Every time he achieved something great his sisters told him they'd do or give him anything he would like for the entire month whenever he asked. He would be offered the same thing from each of them except for his mother since she'd already given him a job so she'd give him a raise soon afterward as well as he graduated highschool while he was only twelve.... this time taking the custom robot. Dravocn treated everyone how they treated him... so he reciprocated the way his family treated him to him treating them as well as they did him, treating his sisters like queens and giving his parents overly excessive praise because that's what he was raised around... he never allowed himself to become a spoiled brat... he knew he earned everything he got through what to most people would be considered hard work ... but to him it was a hobby done right with excellent rewards.His family never moved... they've always lived in Central. Dravocn got his girlfriend in fifth grade, she was older than him by a good three years as he started to skip grades by second grade, he found her adorable and she treated him with kindness and held such intelligence he couldn't understand why she purposefully got grades to keep her in her own age range... her brain was clearly older than the people she associated with... he didn't understand even after she had explained to him it was to have consistency in her friends and not be made fun of for her intellect... Drav still couldn't understand... why do something that would not benefit you or others? He was always the kind of person who would crush on someone but never make a move... his confidence and fear of rejection is something that he held with much anger.... so she asked him if he'd like to be her boyfriend... she felt so weird since she was talking to someone young enough to be a second grader while she was a fifth graders age.... but he said yes immediately and treated her just as well as he did his sisters from that point on. three years later he was already in his freshman year in high-school... being ridiculed by his new-found fellow classmates about his age and the fact that he was a nerd to be in high-school so soon. His girlfriend had just made it to eighth grade, she was quite popular in her school, she never talked about Drav and he was okay with that... he figured it had to do with the same reason why she was getting neutral grades... consistency in her friends... that and he was pretty young... also understandable. He never cared about the ridicule he got however he did use his alchemical abilities on students who made fun of his family and girlfriend... being all of his dislikes is one thing as well as making fun of him... but you cross the line when you mess with family. Another two years passed and Drav had graduated in honor roll with flying colors, he was proud of himself... as was his family as previously explained, his girlfriend made it to her freshman year and it was at that point he found out how badly her family treated her.... this mad him furious.... family should never treat their own badly... that is the biggest line to cross.... Dravocn watched his girlfriend deal with her brothers and father beating her into submission to do whatever they liked... Dravocn was so close to being convicted of manslaughter he could taste it through the seething rage he could see by the scarlet skin he had somehow achieved in fury.... every time he would immediately run to her to see if she was okay after they finished with her, she always told him she was okay... he could tell she was lying... but she said it with a smile on her face as well as tears when she looked up at him. Dravocn would always tell her that the offer of him killing them secretively is always open... but she always denied it... she was too nice to them... too good for them... she didn't want him to stoop to their level... such a good heart. One day Drav was called as he was one of her emergency contacts, she was dying.... her body stopped working under continuous abuse.... her father was in the hospital with her when Drav got there... easily one could tell he'd been crying and furious due to him knowing who did it.... she requested him in and her father to leave... he didn't even fight back but when he passed Drav gave him a murderous glare. Drav immediately held her hands, and she told him to promise her something... he only nodded as he was too busy crying, she wanted him to achive the highest position anyone could ever achieve... to change the world... to rid the world of its aggression and hatred.... she then asked him to come closer and he did, tears dripping from his eyes onto her adorable smiling face, and she kissed him... he followed her head to lower so that she would not have to hold her head up as she needs to recover he thought.... but when she hit the pillow while still in the kiss... her lips softened... and the heart monitor rang in a continuous high pitch.... he didn't pull away from the kiss until a nurse shoved him away to work on her as she called for doctors... he was still crying even as he was walking home.... but he made a vow to keep his promise to her. Dravocn got his automail after his dad, an engineer and mechanic... and a very good one at that, found him on the floor bleeding through his missing limbs. His father works as the founder of the biggest corporation in Amestria alongside his wife/Drav's mother. A corporation that is highly funded by the military as they require tons of equipment and machines.... this is how all of the Hecoro family knows that there are tanks in this time period, however the corporation isn't only funded by the military, it works for the public as well, in terms of trains, automobiles, automail, and military vehicles. His father never wanted to be stuck in a cubicle or office however he did prefer working in his office which was pretty much a workhouse where he'd repair or make what was ordered.... this was made much easier when he found that Drav could repair things as if they were never broken/rusted in the first place ... like mint condition with Drav's alchemy. His dad replaced these limbs with the automail through much time ... Dravocn never screamed or flinched even once... he knew his family was worried to death after finding him... he was only ashamed of his greed. Dravocn lost his arm and leg via visiting the Alchemy Door, he wanted to revive his recently deceased girlfriend and instead ended up sacrificing his body to the door, he could really care less about getting his body back ... in fact having the automail to help protect himself was a bonus... especially since it's usually hidden within his clothing. Dravocn's girlfriend was a cute girl really... she had long brown hair, big green eyes, she was short, and was very smart... he wanted her back .... literally only a week had passed before he attempted to bring her back... he missed her that much... I mean the guy sacrificed half of his body for her, he obviously didn't get what he wanted back.... just as every other person who used human alchemy... he'd failed. He now seeks to improve his alchemy abilities, and achieve furher... at that time, when he achieves what his girlfriend had promised him they'd achieve together, will he be proud. Dravocn got his blades that he usually carries by his side from his father who got them from his dead grandfather who was in the war.... Drav's grandfather was a high ranking officer before he died valiantly in battle, these blades are a symbol of his grandfather and his families honor. Dravocn doesn't like most people, he hates what he is told to do half the time... mainly because it involves hurting hard working people... though correcting corruption is one of his favorite activities that the military does let him do... however it's only on occasion that they tell him that... so he tends to find out that the officers stationed at his rendezvous are usually committing illegal acts anyway and then turns them in without them ever knowing that he was of the military.... again ... he is adept in stealth and recon... gathering intel comes naturally to him. A good majority of the time he works alone however he does sometimes have to bring a partner.... interestingly enough they're usually female... don't ask why... he doesn't know either. He treats his partner as they show him they are worthy of... the same way he treats his superiors, co-workers, and subordinates, though he does treat the women nicer.... however still equal to what they are worthy of.... if that makes any sense. Dravocn still pushes his way towards his final goal even after a year of working as a state alchemist. Drav has always hated people... for their corruption.... for what they do to others.... their greed.... he's hated them for these reasons.... the loss of his girlfriend has only solidified his opinion on the world and it's people.

Personality:
Dravocn is a person who most would call strange, since he doesn't act like most do.... this guy is nice to pretty much everyone.... only because he has to, since he hates the general public... don't get me wrong, he does like certain people.... but he hates people as a whole. He's rather unethical, as well as insane... the kind of insane that means more along the lines of 'ecstatic when death of people is involved'.... yeah.... he hates people that much. He's extremely intelligent and studies in his free time, even when on vacation... this shows his determination on improving his skills as well as his love for knowledge.... he's only willing to share knowledge to those close to him or if it benefits him to do so... so he's secretive as well... he's also very good at keeping secrets in a more social sense of the term secrets. He is naturally classically polite... like ... palace butler polite.... even though his family is filthy rich, thanks to his mother being the creator of a mega corporation and his father for being the best mechanic/engineer most can find. Due to the fact that he studies so much and is otherwise doing work for the military, as well as his hatred for people, he is socially inept and has essentially no understanding or skills when it comes to social activity.. he crushes on pretty much everyone girl he's met... and I mean romantic crushing... not the kind of crushing you find now a days where it has nothing to do with the heart and more with the loins... I mean romantic... he especially crushes on girls that meet his criteria of not doing what he doesn't like. He is a tactical and scientific genius, and his plans are always in detail and adaptable... there's always a backup plan with him... also a reason why the military gave him his position so fast.

Eneanagram: Type 6 wing 5: The Defender: The committed, security-oriented type. Sixes are reliable, hard-working, responsible, and trustworthy. Excellent "troubleshooters," they foresee problems and foster cooperation, but can also become defensive, evasive, and anxious—running on stress while complaining about it. They can be cautious and indecisive, but also reactive, defiant and rebellious. They typically have problems with self-doubt and suspicion

MBTI: INTP: The Thinker: INTP's love theories and believe that everything can be analyzed and improved. They are not that concerned with the real world and practical things; from the INTP’s perspective, it is often less exciting than ideas and intellectual pursuits. People with this personality type have no difficulties noticing patterns where others cannot, which makes them brilliant theorists and analysts.
Accumulated knowledge is the most valued asset of any INTP. Imagine an immensely complicated clockwork that is constantly absorbing, processing and generating all kinds of theories—this is how the INTP mind works. People with the INTP personality type possess the most logically precise mind of all personality types. They can easily notice even the tiniest discrepancies between two statements, no matter how much time has passed in between. It is a bad idea to lie to an INTP. They may appear dreamy sometimes, but this is not because their mind is resting, quite the opposite.

Unskillful at/Dislikes:
Dravocn hates people as a general term, however he tolerate
s them fairly well if they aren't: large (in terms of wide body shape (for this means they're a glutton for food... also meaning greedy)), mean for no reason, ignorant/idiotic, dishonest, closed minded, overly commanding, angry out of nowhere, ignoring him, greedy, ego-centric.... I guess you get the point and i should just put etc. right? lols luckily his girlfriend was none of these... hence his love for her.

Mannerisms/ Quirks:
Dravocn as I have said is uncommonly polite when he speaks... palace butler polite... he's also got a major crushing problem, he is socially inept in terms of: he doesn't know what boundaries are whether it be physical or social stigmas... he doesn't understand people much.... though he does understand perspective when it comes to choices and situations, and he tends to study in a month more than most do in a year. he's really cautious and careful... as well as plans in excruciating detail.

Weaknesses:
He is insane and believes the majority of people don't deserve to live, people who are in his dislike area are who don't deserve to live, which are most people, given the chance of doing it without legal repercussion he'd do it... as long as the person he's killing meets his dislike criteria. He's unethical and has his moments of sheer maniacal thoughts where he laughs just as maniacally.

Fighting Style/Favoured Weapon:
Dravocn prefers killing his opponent rather slowly.... make it a suffering they deserve, meaning he'd prefer to poison his opponent or slit his throat slowly, he also likes to play with his new toys before he has to throw them away, I think that's self explanatory in both mental and physical (physical being he'd prefer to get his target angry and sloppy as well as exhausted before he kills them). He's adept in judo, muay-thai, and jeet-kune-do.

Current Research:
Dravocn is honestly studying everything that shows up at all... whether it is put on his lap or otherwise... his books and documents are his greatest weapon other than his mind... and he studies thoroughly putting in great effort in understanding, and is usually extremely accurate when explaining the subjects. But he mainly focuses around Bio-Mechanics as he finds it to be useful for the advancement of society. He has special access to the fifth lab research and research on chimeras to help him on his own research. The military overlooks his experimentation on volunteers or himself.

Transmutation Circle:
Dravocn's transmutation circles (yes he has more than one..) one on his arm, one on his auto mail arm, one on his hand, one on his auto mail hand, and one on each of his gloves... which is funny because he doesn't need a transmutation circle to do alchemy... he's just very thorough. Each are in the form of a pentacle (no not a pentagram for satanism.... a pentacle... it's from a pagan thing... there is a huge difference between the two religions.) All he really needs to do to activate it is think about it.... since he has so many and doesn't need them... clapping, snapping, tapping (his feet or his fingers), anything really...

Light Colour: Dark Pink/Red/Purple a mix of all three of them

(Please fill out the following section for each 'most specialized' ability that your character uses. I don't believe in micromanaging basic abilities that all alchemists would have learned in practice or theory early on, but if your character has a 'specialized' ability they've learned, especially if it has to do with Gold Transmutation or Combat, it will need to be approved. Some of these abilities may overlap or fall into various categories/levels of ability due to various desired effects. Some low level abilities may be similar or used by more than one character as well, considering that since basic alchemy is not specialized, thus alchemists practice the same schools of alchemy, learning the same general knowledge at that level.)

Weapon Generator:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 1
-Element: Titanium
-Description of Ability: Dravocn generates a titanium weapon of any kind he wishes (as long as it the amount of matter weighs the same as what he's generating.... though this requirement is only needed when he chooses to need it... like when he's in front of officials that know the rules to alchemy) from anywhere he wishes (since he doesn't need transmutation circles), though it is usually a blade.

Repair:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 1
-Element: Matches that of the object being repaired
-Description of Ability: Dravocn uses the powers of alchemy to repair any given object back to the way it was, even if it was a book with missing pages, the missing pages would show as well as the words on those missing pages, in the newly recovered book

Tool Generator lvl 1:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 1
-Element: Titanium
-Description of Ability: Dravocn generates a titanium tool of any kind he wishes (as long as it the amount of matter weighs the same as what he's generating.... though this requirement is only needed when he chooses to need it... like when he's in front of officials that know the rules to alchemy) from anywhere he wishes (since he doesn't need transmutation circles), an examples would be from a simple lug-nut to a power-tool to a customized specialty tool

Weapon Generator lvl 2:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 2
-Element: Titanium
-Description of Ability: Dravocn does the same thing he does in Weapon Generator lvl 1, however here he can add complexity to the weapon... but only a small amount... examples would be from a pistol to a snake sword to a

Security Generator:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 2
-Element: Several different substances depending on the kind of security
-Description of Ability: Dravocn generates a security system of different complexities. Examples would be from door locks to cameras to extremely intricate safes (Of course this would require substance equivalent to such a thing.... though this requirement is only needed when he chooses to need it... like when he's in front of officials that know the rules to alchemy)

Substance Change:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 2
-Element: Whatever Drav wants
-Description of Ability: Dravocn decomposes a substance of his chosing (as long as he's near it or can see it) and turns it into whatever he wishes, he can even create a new substance entirely (as long as the substance is not a noble gas, and as long as they are in the same state... like solids can only form via solids, liquids can only form with other liquids, and gasses can only form from other gasses, therefore if he wants to mix two different substances he must make them so via temp which is usually the easiest way.)

Complex Generator:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 3
-Element: Different substances depending on how it's composed
-Description of Ability: Dravocn does the same thing as Weapon Generator lvl 2 and Tool Generator lvl 1 except this is even more complex, examples would be a custom robot to a suit of armor that moves on it's own to turning someone or himself into metal/machine (Of course this would require substance equivalent to such a thing.... though this requirement is only needed when he chooses to need it... like when he's in front of officials that know the rules to alchemy)

Camping in Style:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 3
-Element: Whatever he wants
-Description of Ability: Dravocn at this level is able to generate a whole building complete with furniture and appliances of his choosing (Of course this would require substance equivalent to such a thing which is made easier with Substance Change.... though this requirement is only needed when he chooses to need it... like when he's in front of officials that know the rules to alchemy)

[Name of Ability Here]:
-Rank of Ability: Tier 4
-Element:
-Description of Ability:


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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Tue Jun 03, 2014 8:21 pm

Great start! PM me if you have other questions. I'll turn on the temporary chat box again in the mean time, in case you drop in and we both happen to be online. Otherwise, I'm installing a better Cbox soon, but not sure i'll have time till this weekend. Smile Can't wait to chat with you more about your character's plot and pull your him into a thread.
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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:18 pm

Here's a little critique for you, since you PMed and asked. Smile Though it looks like you're still working on the alchemy abilities. Which, as soon as you're done with them, I hope to get your character into the thread with Mobius so that both our characters can do their first RPed yearly examination. If you are so inclined to join the thread.

Also, I was wondering if your character might know my girl Rain. Her family is in the automail business. Their families could know one another, and maybe she knew your character when he had the accident and needed the automail.
Maybe Rain even reminds him of his ex GF? Would he pursue her? If so, that would be fun to RP.

Just some ideas!


Anyway, here's the bit of critique so far Smile !! I didn't mean for it to be so much, but I want him to be the best Dravocn you've ever RPed Razz And I really like him. haha. Soooo here goes...!


Character Name:
You can have multiple characters if you want Razz unless you love the name Dravocn SOOOOO much you only want that ONE name Wink


Character Face:
I THOUGHT i recognized him ^.^ And i zoomed in a little so I could read what's written on the right side of the page, and it's from the Anime Hakuouki. The character is Hajime Saito. He's badass, btw. Good choice 0.0. lol


Nationality:
Amestrian (just, what country he's from Smile )


Specialization:
Did he learn mechanics growing up in the particular family he did, and then specialize in the military for Intel/ Recon missions? Or did he go into the military wanting to be a mechanic and end up switching fields?


History:
I'm curious about the blades he carries? Were they passed down in his family? from a war or something? from a specific relative? Why do they remind him of his family? That'd be interesting to know. Smile

Let's go ahead and move the part about his family in the Personality section up to the history section. I'd like to see in the history just a little on his upbringing/ family background. Maybe just a brief touch on relationships between family memebers or anything special growing up.. if they moved around or has he always lived in Central City?

Could this large corporation his mother and father operate, have something to do with manufacturing? Such as automobiles/ automail/ trains/ military vehicles, etc? If so, then our two character's families will certainly know one another, and they'll have frequent interaction.

Also, what is the agreement he and the ex GF had on his becoming Fuhrer? If you could elaborate just a little, that'd be great. We could see a little more about his aspirations for the future and understand a little better where he gets his motivation for being in the military.


One other thing, if he is a scientific genius, let's have him start at the rank of State Alchemist. If he was not skilled in alchemy, then he would start at a lower rank, because he wouldn't meet those qualifications, but unless there's some reason he doesn't have what it takes to be a Major/ State Alchemist, he needs to start at the rank of Major/ State Alchemist. Auto-officer-rank! Gotta love it! It's payoff for being super smart haha.

Ah, and something else you might consider, is adding a bit about how his dislike of people effects the way he interacts with those in the military with him. Maybe that's why he enjoys being a State Alchemist -he can work alone if he wants to, for the most part, and have the chance to be given Kill Orders for assassinations, etc etc. His ideal job, eh? haha
And if he doesn't like people, how does that effect his family relationships? Are they exempt? Though, it seems like he does not like his family much, if he does not like their greed and gluttony ^.^ Even outside of being Psychotic, is he the black sheep of the family, in other aspects, too?



Personality:
Explain just briefly for me in the history why it is he hates people so much? Something happen in the past that bent his mind toward being wicked? Bad experience growing up? Bad experience with Ishvalans? Bitterness toward the world over losing his GF? If so, he wasn't always that way? Maybe he wants others to suffer as much as he has, in the past? Maybe he's addicted to the pain of the loss of his GF and wants to re-create the suffering, because it had to have been at least a year -year n a half ago, for him. (being as that's about as long as it takes for him to be able to use his automail very well. Kind of retrain the body so to speak) Anyway, please elaborate a little, because that trait seems to be a focus.


I think you should take out the "polite" part in the personality, because you mention multiple times he doesn't like people, enjoys watching others suffer/die, and that he doesn't have much social understanding, etc.. which means he cannot be both.. Bad at being socially apt and good at being socially apt. It might be a little different, if you were to say he is simply lacking Tact/ good timing/ a certain measure of common sense, which might make it seem sometimes as tho he were socially inept, though he's really not.




Current Research:
You don't have to edit this right away, but it's something to consider as we RP, that his research is likely having to do with A) Any personal motivations, such as bringing his GF back to life. B)his Elemental focus of studies in alchemy. This research is what each alchemist has to present to the higher ups at the end of the year, in order to maintain their rank as State Alchemist.. to show that they are accomplishing something by their studies with State Military funding given them. If you need some examples, or want to talk about possibilities here, let me know, and we'll work out some ideas. Just let me know what element/ ability type you kind of want him to have and we can brain storm on possibilities to make it happen.



Transmutation colour:
Thought it would be nice to have a visual, so took the liberty of pulling up a few hex codes that might match his colour? if you like any of them, can use it for the text in his bio for it or whatever.

#66023C
#7A2D5A
#8F2756


something like any of these?



Abilities:
I won't comment much here until you have all of them figured out, unless you want me to brain storm with you on various abilities, and which rank they might fall under. Otherwise, you may refer to This little thread to help out.


On his alchemy abilities listed so far, you mention him having the ability to create any weapon, which requires him to have that knowledge of the elements involved in creating the metal alloys, the gears and parts and heat to mold the metal, etc etc, so it's great he has that kind of a background in his family; he'll have learned a lot of that growing up likely, so it makes sense something like that would be somewhat elementary for him. Smile Love it!

However, keep in mind, if he keeps his 'focus' of study too spread out, he'll be more of a jack of all trades, and less of a 'specialist' in one area, thus weakening his overall talent in any one area of alchemy.. unless ... is his focus on ... let's call it... "Mechanical Alchemy"? something along those lines? Maybe he's integrating his family's knowledge about mechanics and mixing it with his alchemy to create an ultimate weapon for the military/ ultimate automail/ etc.???

And in that case, does he use his alchemy to create various weapons and then physically fight with them? similar to how Edward does, when he turns his automail arm into a weapon?




Well, that's all for now! Hope that helps you flesh him out a little more. I'll be hanging around in the cbox much as i can to try to catch you to toss around more ideas or whatever. Otherwise, PM or reply back to this thread.

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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Sat Jun 07, 2014 12:59 pm

Nice on the updates. I'll go ahead and approve him for now! Just run the final ability by me when you get it figured out Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:41 pm

Hey Drav, I was wondering, while I'm giving Dravocn his ID number for state military, do you want to adjust his code name at all to reflect more on his ability with metals/ various elements and constructing, reconstructing their basic forms  or maybe his bio specialization? Maybe the BioMech Alchemist or something like that? 

Because there's not much in his bio on the Intel stuff. Granted, he's only been in the military service for a year or so, so we can build on something along those lines if you prefer, as far as future for him, but doesn't look like, based on what you wrote, that's what his real focus has been on over the year. Though.. maybe bc of his specialization and special accesses to select 5th lab documents and such, they've pressed him to become more involved with some missions which might include some intel networking and such?
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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:08 pm

see .... I was basing his code name on his intelligence and his ability to acquire intel.... but we could change it if you like
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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Sun Jun 08, 2014 1:20 am

was just inquiring ^.^ I think most State Alchemists could be considered highly intelligent, so their code name is kind of based on what the abilities are, of that person. But I'll leave it up to you. I don't want you to have a code name you don't like, for the char. Wink
 So, was just asking. I'll leave it as Intel Alchemist unless there's another you come up with that you'd prefer.
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PostSubject: Re: Dravocn Maximillion Hecoro -State Alchemist   Sun Jun 08, 2014 1:44 am

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Hehehe. Made a State Alchemist banner for yours, too! Hope it's suitable Wink I can redo, if you want. Couldn't read the text tho, if the colour was too dark so had to make it kind of lighter.
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